Ah, a new update, that's really nice ^^. But I just recommend you to adjust the size of the image, one can't read the characters' name. Two more questions:

Who's kissing Blacksmith?

Do you have some previous idea of how many times you'll update this sketch?

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"…when the first baby laughed for the first time, its laugh broke into a thousand pieces, and they all went skipping about, and that was the beginning of fairies."

This is my sketchpad, I throw a bunch of little work together, it will always be updated randomly and many times. If you like a piece in it for the club it might be best to cut that image from the rest of the sketch.

Blacksmith is kissing the character Gordon, he is a full armored warrior who comes from Dragonreach with the cat-like guy Qwin.
I've been playing around with Gordon's personality and looks. We won't see his face ever so I've been trying to design a dragon looking armor he can wear. I can draw armor, just not that good at designing it. Like the relationship between Vexx+Anits+Tami I've decided to put some drama in, Gordon and the Blacksmith will have something going on between themselves.

Well, it would be nice to put some drama between them since this kind of relationships aren't all happiness.

A thing that I should add here is that Anits suffers silently, that is, even if she sees that her "rival" is receiving attention from her love interest, she neither says nothing nor she takes agressive/sly actions, she just watches from afar with knots in her stomach, and eventually will gloom, which by the way it's not difficult to notice on her, but she hardly will say what it is, just replying with a simple phrase and a not so convincing smile.

A last advice: when you're going to update, make sure NOT to delete the image, but edit it instead and change it, or else you'll loose all the comments and views and favs you've received.

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"…when the first baby laughed for the first time, its laugh broke into a thousand pieces, and they all went skipping about, and that was the beginning of fairies."

Yeah, hun I know. Unless it is a big update I usually won't let it notify my watchers.

Good to know about Anits, personality wise though, Anits is very friendly isn't she? She will be one of the first characters appearing so I wanted to make sure I got her right.

Sorry, the comic is starting out slow. I'm still working on character design and style in which I will present the comic. May possibly convert some of it into a fanfic to get it moving faster.

She's a bit wary at first with new people (like any other person would be). Yep, Anits prefer not to involve herself in desnecessary fights, and she only gets upset at someone when she's insulted or the person is rude to her. When it's an insult she sulks and glares, saying nothing then (and depending of the insult, she starts to cry silently with a sob here and there), when the person is rude she gives a sarcastic reply (but never snide remarks, she keeps that for the enemies).

Partly fanfic... It would be much more complex to keep each character, well, IN character than drawing them. But you can give a try. The way I understood, you intend into making a page for the specific chapter and then write the fanfic along with it, is that so?

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"…when the first baby laughed for the first time, its laugh broke into a thousand pieces, and they all went skipping about, and that was the beginning of fairies."

okey good to know. You'll be seeing her real soon.

Even though the prologue part is full comic I've been playing around with the main story style. I'm going to copy "Alien Dice" or "Strings of Fate" style.

[link] Alien dice is basically a 3-4 panel strip with a paragraph to page text following it. Strings of Fate is along the same lines, except the individual panels appear in different sections of the text.

Yeah, Alien Dice will be a good choice since the other one can't be done on DA, I think it's interesting!
But you have to keep in mind that writting demands a good bunch of details about the elements inside it, or else it will be too hollow and vague. Like, I suppose you're not that type, but there are some writers which keep their minds on the speech and jokes inside them more than the rest, and all you have is just a pile of speech which you doesn't have the when, where, how and why, you probably learned about this in school during grammar classes.
Once you start writting I'll keep an eye on it, if I find something that can be improved in the next chapters to come I'll tell you, nothing too critical of course.

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"…when the first baby laughed for the first time, its laugh broke into a thousand pieces, and they all went skipping about, and that was the beginning of fairies."